My comment to Jennie:
Great job on the use of imagery, the last part of your poem is very good. The violin, softly heard, gently played, soothing sounds, it is all there. Very sensual, great job overall!
My comment to Jennie:
Great job on the use of imagery, the last part of your poem is very good. The violin, softly heard, gently played, soothing sounds, it is all there. Very sensual, great job overall!
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